Aftermath

It is here.

We carry on without knowing. That it is here.

Don't understimate yourself, you are all you have.

Even when there is no answer to that question, you are there.

It is here and you are it. You are here and it is now. You are now and maybe that is the answer.

Up and down, and in the end it is only round and round.

Don't understimate yourself, you are powerful. Only that you don't know it yet. But I will show you something. If you are reading it by now, it means you are somewhere beyond them. You are us. Us and them, and after all, we are ordinary men. That is what it hurts. But that is what makes us human. We have the power to be human. Our mind would escape if we hadn't that chain. Many minds have escaped without saying goodbye. So keep being a human, but keep considering you as us, not them.

Little Poetry 2

The eyes were shut
spiders were there
a lemon tree waited
for spring to come

Castles forgotten
in the luminous day.
Whatever you think
was thought yesterday.

Dreaming this night I saw
two people dancing alone.
No music were there,
only their souls.

Speechless I listened,
their movements were slow
I can't answer your question:
My reason has drown

Nobody asks for money
in the land of gold.
All they want is an answer
of the happiness god.

Escape from reality
a goddess said to me.
It is risky and dangerous,
but it's how it must be.

If paradise city is near my town,
I would satisfy my soul,
spending the hours thinking
that I've never been there before.

But stupid is the question
if the answer is always no,
so keep on dreaming baby
cos I'll always let you go.

A yes appears in my dream
but you are not there.
Who is that woman?
I really do care.

Explaining all my thoughts
is so hard to understand.
So keep on dreaming sugar
I'll never be your man.

I've just seen a face
I do know the place
were we just met.
It was a sunny morning
the smile on my face.
And you were daydreaming
of life and death.
However, the only possible answer
is to see me again.
I will explain you insanity.
I will teach you about faith.
If love is not the answer,
nobody will understand.

Against Romeo and Juliet

I don’t know if anyone of you have read Romeo and Juliet but, for me it is a story that has little or no sense at all. I will try to explain my point of view to you in the next lines. For example, how deep is a love when you have just been two times with your lover? Is it enough that time to be able to kill yourself because of love? One possible explanation is the fact that both Romeo and Juliet are youngsters and it was their first love. Because of that, they had a feeling that was new and unknown for them and this feeling could have leaded them to die.

If you accept this theory as an answer to the “incongruence” of the deaths, then we must also say that the worldwide accepted idea of this play being a really inspiring story of love is not accurate. How can it be the most beautiful story of love this one when they don’t experience even a 1% of the “mysteries” of love? They just declare love and say 3 or 4 beautiful sentences to each other! There are much more beautiful stories of love out there. Let me just remind you about García Márquez or Pablo Neruda.

On the other hand, Romeo and Juliet is a classic written between 1591 and 1595. We can’t apply the standards of today’s literature to this play. I mean that the metaphors and words used to seduce by the lovers can’t be rated with today’s standards. Here I must accept that they are good examples of a nice use of poetry. However, what I am criticizing here is the overall sense of congruence, the merit of being acknowledged as a great love story. For me it is just a basic classic story which is good to introduce people to love stories but there is nothing really spectacular. 

Little poetry

Could someone tell me what to do
When all the trenchs are far behind
From the war we are fighting today?

Is there an illusion more powerful
Than the one of having you by my side
And scream your name in the darkest night?

If there is any kind of god up in the sky,
Would he be kind to take me by your side?

This is a quarter of things
I would like to say to you.
But do not worry
I will only do this when I feel in blue.

You've gone too far
from my lonely days
and that will tear us apart
if I don't see you today.

Have I forgotten
That my eyes were not opened?

Outline

         I.            The social networks have a lot of people against them but it is one of the next steps in the evolution of humanity towards a more united one. Besides there can be a controlled use of them without many problems.


      II.        People against it.

a.       Anti-technology people’s ideas.

                                                               i.      We are controlled.

                                                             ii.      We are addicted.

                                                            iii.      There is no privacy.

b.      Government

                                                               i.      Uncontrollable points of view.

                                                             ii.      Critics reunite.

                                                            iii.      Manipulation is difficult.

                                                           iv.      Too many opinions.

c.       Old people.

                                                               i.      They don’t control it.

                                                             ii.      They don’t understand it.

    III.            Evolution of humanity.

a.       Good aspects.

                                                               i.      You can meet new people

                                                             ii.      You know more about your friends.

                                                            iii.      Political activism.

b.      Next step in history.

                                                               i.      New communicative frontiers.

                                                             ii.      New possibilities and technologies.

                                                            iii.      Impossible to return to the past.

    IV.            Need of control

a.       Parents.

                                                               i.      Children need parental control.

                                                             ii.      Abusive content (+18).

                                                            iii.      Danger of unknown people.

b.      Wasting time.

                                                               i.      Doing nothing useful.

                                                             ii.      Internet not being employed as a tool.

                                                            iii.      Too much leisure.

c.       Illegal activities.

                                                               i.      Hacking.

                                                             ii.      Drugs.

                                                            iii.      Violence.

      V.            There must be an effective use of the powerful tool called internet. It is the future, but there should be some changes in the way we use it nowadays.

Thesis Statement

The social networks have a lot of people against them but it is one of the next steps in the evolution of humanity towards a more united one. Besides there can be a controlled use of them without many problems.

Problem/Solution Text

There is a really big problem with the increasingly high speed of evolution of developed countries. It is a fact that they consume more and more resources. However, these are not infinite. There is also a lot of injustice and differences between first and third world countries. Although we produce seven times the amount of food we need, poor countries don’t receive a part of this because they have no money to pay, or their governments are corrupted. If we keep on doing things like this, there will be not future for our descendants.

A possible solution would be the lessening of the growing rhythm. By doing this, we would adapt to the possibilities the earth offers us. Moreover, if we accept transgenic food as a good product, there is also the possibility to nourish poor countries. We have to be able to stop and think before continuing this path because it is really needed a solution.